In the play trifles there are three women characters thought one is talked about and not heard speaking in this play. I am speaking about Mrs. Minnie Foster. The other two women in the play are Mrs. Hale and Mrs. Peters. In the play Trifles Minnie is accused of killing her husband. While the men are examining the house and barn for clues Mrs. Peters and Mrs. Hale are inside talking about Minnie. Mrs. Hale describes Minnie as a person who used to be happy when she where younger and then she seen change in her being quiet and she describes her as being somewhat like a bird sweet and pretty but timid and fluttery. Mrs. Peters doesn’t really Minnie very well to describe her with the knowledge of knowing her like Mrs. Hale. Though she does see the things she was going through kind of puts herself in Minnie’s shoes. Both women at first do not believe that Minnie could commit such a crime. The men in trifles describe Minnie as strange and they even commented on her house work saying she wasn’t much of a house keeper. I would describe Minnie as a woman who was quiet and kept everything she felt to herself. I think she was lonely and was pushed to the edge of sanity by her husband. Mrs. Hale can be described as a women who took her house work very seriously she had gotten upset when the men criticized Minnie’s housekeeping skills and she voiced her opinion she seems like a women who would speak her mind. Mrs. Hale regretted not checking in on Minnie showing that she somewhat cared for the women.
Use punctuation a bit more frequently than you have. Your pronouns are a bit confusing because I'm not sure at times which "she" or "her" you are referring to. Here is an example of edits you might consder: "Mrs. Hale describes Minnie as a person who used to be happy when she was younger, but who changed later on to being a more quite person. Mrs. Hale describes her as being somewhat like a bird: Sweet and pretty but also timid and fluttery." Even so, you have made some very nice obervations on the characters. Good work.
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